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  • November 26, 2018 at 5:54 pm #376959

    Erik Fransman
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    Fujifilm X-T1, 1/550s, f/9. 10mm, ISO 200

    Please click for Flickr:
    Beach Life

     

  • November 26, 2018 at 6:25 pm #376962

    Rob Eyers
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    I can’t unsee this Erik…thanks?

  • November 27, 2018 at 10:33 am #377043

    John Thompson
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    I thought the same thing Rob.  Eric how could you??  LOL!

  • November 27, 2018 at 11:12 am #377046

    Kent DuFault
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    Such an interesting man. The lighting is dramatic and certainly plays well to his physique, which is what caught your eye I'm sure. Still… something seems missing here. Maybe consider a tighter crop? So, that the man is much more prominent within the frame. As interesting as he is… in my mind he is really lost against that background.

  • November 27, 2018 at 12:52 pm #377052

    Federico Alegria
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    This is what street photography is about, the unseen everyday moments of life. I really would love to see this in a horizontal shot rather than the squared format. This is just my taste talking, but if your intention was to keep a 1:1 ratio, then there is no problem at all, however, a wider crop would see much better since one of the shadows has been “decapitated”.

    Thanks a lot for sharing this image with us.

    PS: I'm wondering, how does this look in the classic chrome profile?

  • November 27, 2018 at 1:45 pm #377064

    John Thompson
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    Sorry I forgot this was in the ST when I made my post.

  • November 29, 2018 at 6:36 pm #377509

    Erik Fransman
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    Thank you for commenting. I will try your suggestions but need some time. I am in the middle of two film productions, so no spare time to work on photos.
    Just two quickies: A horizontal shot and a tighter crop.

  • November 29, 2018 at 6:38 pm #377510

    Erik Fransman
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    Crop

  • November 30, 2018 at 12:38 am #377554

    Tom M
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    🙂 The guy on the left looks like a sumo wrestler. I like the tighter crop better…

     

  • November 30, 2018 at 12:56 am #377558

    Tobie
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    Agreeing with Tom…

  • November 30, 2018 at 9:36 am #377657

    Kent DuFault
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    Me too. I like the tighter crop. Now every nuance of his features can be studied, and it doesn't lose the context of where he is.

  • November 30, 2018 at 10:18 am #377665

    Jay Ward
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    The guy in the right side background and the sloping awning next to him draw my eye away from the foreground.

  • November 30, 2018 at 11:27 am #377680

    Anonymous

    I like the cropped version too.

  • November 30, 2018 at 3:10 pm #377722

    Albirder
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    Much better crop for me!

  • December 9, 2018 at 8:23 pm #379308

    Anne Hornsby
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    Interesting slice of life image.    Agree with others re close crop.   Also agree with Jay re fellow being a distraction (the white shirt fellow in background but in front of face/chest of guy on right).  Maybe turn his shirt black?

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